Tuesday 28 June 2016
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Talofa Sophie my name is Avei, I am a year 7 at Edmund Hillary School. I love horses and they're cool. The backround of the slides were great, but maybe you should go back and check your capital letters in the beginning of the words and sentences. Other than that it is fantastic. Have you ever ridden a horse? Was it fun searching for the facts you needed to learn about the horses. If you have any spare time on your hands could you be able to check out my blog-http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/-If you don't mind could you ask some of your friends to check out my blog, THANKS!
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