Wednesday 1 June 2016

Mya's and i's story the mystery of my dad

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  1. Unknown7 June 2016 at 16:16

    Hi Sophie and Mya, this is a great story, I was really keen to keep reading and find out what happened. Just remember to always use capital letters for people's names and place names like New York for example, and use commas and full stops where there is pauses. Good job!!

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  2. Anonymous16 June 2016 at 14:01

    cool I love the story

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    1. Anonymous16 June 2016 at 14:51

      Hi Caitlan,

      Can you check the quality comments instructions at the bottom of the page. Make sure that you give the author some next steps or things to work on.

      Thanks,

      Mr McAulay

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  3. Anonymous22 June 2016 at 12:38

    hey sophie i think you definatly beat your goal it was a really good story and i want to hear more of your stories
    thanks renae

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  4. Anonymous22 June 2016 at 12:45

    hi it is chloe
    i was reading this and it was getting really interesting she found the dad and then the story ended what happened to the mum and where was the dad the whole time.

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